In this example I took a short writing sample and made it shorter, more concise, and easier to read. The readability statistics of the original sample and my revision of it are included.
For this project I was given a set of technical instructions that were unclear and were missing information. It was my assignment to research the subject material and find sources that could inform me about how to perform the technical task. Then I used that information to create a new set of clearer and more accurate instructions.
This is a sample office memo that I have written. The main goal of this memo was to persaude my readers to take certain actions.
This is an example where I revised a company memo to make it clearer. The original memo contained words and phrases that are not necessarily appropriate in professionl communication. I re-phrased the errors so as to make the letter more effective in an office environment.